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How to choose a defensible subject and turn historical research into an argument about political courage
The John F. Kennedy Library Foundation created the Profile in Courage Essay Contest in 1994 as a companion to its Profile in Courage Award. Its intellectual starting point is Kennedy's account of elected officials who accepted political risk in order to serve a larger public interest. The student contest turns that idea into historical inquiry: entrants must identify an act of political courage, reconstruct the pressures around it and argue why the decision deserves that description.
Its most distinctive editorial choice is to discourage the obvious biography. Official guidance directs students towards lesser-known local, state and regional figures, and the judging criteria reward an original subject, varied reliable evidence, primary material and critical analysis. Content carries slightly more weight than presentation, but clear structure and controlled prose still matter. The result is closer to a compact piece of public-history writing than to an inspirational essay about an admired leader.
The official archive shows that preference clearly. The 2025 winner, Emily Matthews, wrote about former Delaware governor Ruth Ann Minner and her politically costly campaign to protect public health through an indoor-smoking ban. Second-place writer Scarlet Strogov chose Eleanor Tinsley, a former Houston school-board member, while other recognised essays examined city councillors, governors, judges and education officials. The archive's range is itself instructive: political courage is expected to be demonstrated through a specific decision and its consequences, not through the fame of the subject.
Those examples reveal a judging temperament that values discovery, evidence and moral precision. A writer must show career risk, public pressure and the larger interest served, while resisting the temptation to turn the subject into a flawless hero. From an editor's perspective, this is why the contest deserves attention: it asks students to do serious archival and civic thinking within a tightly controlled essay, and it gives careful research on overlooked public decisions a genuine advantage over borrowed rhetoric.
| Field | Details |
|---|---|
| Competition | JFK Profile in Courage Essay Contest |
| Organiser | John F. Kennedy Library Foundation |
| Typical students | Secondary-school writers interested in history, politics and public decision-making |
| Format | Individual research essay with documented sources and a nominating teacher |
| Best for | Students who can connect historical context, political pressure and close argument |
| Difficulty | Demanding because the paper must be concise, original, well sourced and analytically precise |
For current dates, eligibility and registration details, see the JFK Profile in Courage Essay Contest competition page.
Rated Intermediate. A strong entry needs an original subject, disciplined historical research and a persuasive analysis within a tightly controlled word limit.
The most common weakness in this kind of essay is beginning with an admired public figure and trying to fit courage around the biography. A better method begins with a specific decision. What choice was made? What credible alternatives existed? Who applied pressure, and what could the official reasonably expect to lose?
This approach immediately improves research because it creates questions that sources can answer. Instead of collecting general praise, the student looks for correspondence, speeches, local reporting, legislative records, memoirs and historical analysis that reveal the stakes. The essay becomes an inquiry into judgment under pressure rather than a celebration of reputation.
A promising subject should survive several skeptical questions. Was the action genuinely political and connected to public office? Was there meaningful opposition from voters, colleagues, party leaders or influential interests? Did the official understand the risk at the time? Is there enough reliable material to show that pressure rather than merely assert it?
Students should conduct a short source survey before drafting. If every account repeats the same anecdote without documentation, the topic may be too thin. If the evidence is abundant but the courageous decision cannot be isolated, the topic may be too broad. The best subject offers both a clear moment of choice and enough context to interpret it responsibly.
Not every source should do the same work. A contemporary newspaper can show how the decision was understood in public. A speech or letter can reveal the official’s stated reasoning. A legislative document can establish what happened. A historian can help explain the wider political landscape. Tension among these sources is useful because it prevents the essay from depending on a single polished narrative.
Students should keep notes that separate quotation, paraphrase and their own interpretation. Record where each fact came from at the moment it is collected. This may feel slower than copying promising passages into one document, but it protects accuracy and makes later writing much easier. Good research notes preserve context as well as language.
The word courage can become vague when it is treated as a compliment. The essay needs a working definition connected to the case. Courage might involve accepting political harm to uphold a principle, but the paper must show both the principle and the harm. It should also consider whether the action served another strategic interest.
Counterarguments strengthen the analysis. Perhaps the official’s position was less isolated than it first appears, or perhaps the personal cost emerged only later. Addressing these complications does not weaken the claim. It shows that the student has tested it. The aim is a measured conclusion that remains persuasive after obvious objections have been considered.
A concise paper cannot carry a full life story. The opening should establish the decision and the central claim quickly. Context belongs where it clarifies pressure or consequence, not simply because it is interesting. Each body section should perform a distinct task: explain the stakes, analyse the pressures, examine the action and evaluate why it deserves the chosen interpretation.
Paragraphs should begin with analytical movement rather than chronology alone. A topic sentence can state what a piece of evidence demonstrates about risk, motive or principle. Evidence then supports that point, and commentary explains its significance. This prevents the paper from becoming a chain of quotations connected by summary.
An outline can be tested by reading only its topic sentences. Together they should form a logical path from political pressure to action and interpretation. If they merely list events, the structure is still chronological rather than analytical. If two sentences make the same point, one section may be unnecessary. This simple test helps the writer reserve space for the hardest reasoning and prevents context from crowding out the central case.
The first revision should test the argument, not the punctuation. Highlight every sentence that makes a claim about motive, cost or public reaction. Ask whether the evidence genuinely supports it. Look for places where strong adjectives substitute for proof. If the paper calls an action brave, it should already have shown the danger and the reason for acting.
Next, remove background that does not change the reader’s understanding. Short work gains power through proportion: the most space should go to the central decision and its pressures. Read the essay aloud to find long sentences, repeated transitions and passages where the writer sounds less certain than the evidence allows.
Then ask a reader to state the argument in their own words; confusion often reveals a missing link.
Research writing can become impersonal when students imitate academic language they do not naturally use. Precision is more persuasive than grandeur. A clear sentence that explains a difficult political trade-off is stronger than an ornate sentence that hides the argument. Technical terms should appear only when they improve accuracy.
Teachers and mentors can challenge the reasoning without supplying it. Ask the student to defend the weakest link, identify the best contrary evidence and explain why a source is trustworthy. These conversations help the writer see gaps while preserving independent judgment and authorship.
Information checked on 2026-08-28.
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